Haiku 1

[tara]

Lord, Do you hear me?
Whining about this world,
How can I bear it?


I had to title this Haiku 1 because once I start Haiku-ing ( is that a word?) it is hard to stop. In my classroom we do Sports-ku and I like to write Mama-kus.

Tara

[Josh]

I love that with Haiku you can make a poem out of one solitary thought and not feel pressured to pack a ton of different ideas in. Sometimes too many idea crowd out the clarity of just one important sentiment.

I think you've captured the "groaning of the creation" that Paul talks about.